Tuesday, November 8, 2011

TORN

Booze and Gasoline
Come on, Tell me which is better?
Or a combination of both,
To help me, Cleanse me.
Set me free, From infinity of pain.

Please, Please.
Alcohol isn't enough,
Weakening my memories, To possibly see her.
My thoughts invoke, To remind me that she was quite,
Someone that I could never seize.

Tell me, Discourse to me.
I want to know, what about gasoline,
Soak all the photos of her,
Burn them to ashes , Although they were a part of me,
As far as I don't see Love.

What am I worried of?
Bathe it all in ethanol,
Burn it, Without fear,
This flame spreads, Destroying everything.
The word Love incinerating.

This is an entry to Gasoline Dude's Blogversary Contest

9 comments:

  1. ay may entry na. wala pa akong naiisip. =(

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  2. That first line about Booze and Gasoline reminds me of something, a song maybe, that I can't quite remember. Kanina ko pa iniisip. Literally, I was staring at my monitor for about 2 minutes. Wala parin. Aw.

    I will be eternally envious of people who can write good poems because I.SUCK.AT.IT.

    Good luck! I want to join Gasdude's contest too, pero nahihirapan ako mag-isip kung pano ko isisingit yung Gasoline. Haha.

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  3. Just back to browse some of my friends blogs.. and glad to see that you are still writing..ya let;s live this life without fear..

    Leon
    new blog
    http://singaporesingledaddy.blogspot.com/

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  4. ay ang galing naman! yoko na sumali, wala nako maisip!lols. gluck!

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  5. there, there
    pictures are gone,you can hardly see them,
    You were burnt first,So i think you're got even
    Both used gasoline to escape.

    Heartfelt entry! I hope you feel better now.

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  6. After more than a month of reading and putting scores on each entry, FINALLY! Natapos din! Salamat sa paglahok at pagsuporta sa aking munting patimpalak. :)

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